a Please grace me with your fondest memory
b Don't let it get distorted as you sing
b A thought that wraps you up, a tender thing
a And kisses you with warmth - how you should me
a Share with me what terrors plague your poor head
b Make me weep with what sorrows torture you
b Smother me with the pain that brings you blues
a So that your woes will bother me instead
c The things I know about you show much growth
d But I fear you won't keep pushing forward
e The problems weighing down on you are strong
c I swear I'll bring happiness to us both
d What gives me power are your sad, sad words
e Trust me - your problems won't stay very long
*IT WAS SO HARD TO WRITE THE LAST SIX LINES, mostly because Italian sonnet rhyme scheme has like, eight possible end rhyme schemes. I tried to do it according to the notes we took in Creative Writing - cdc dcd or cde edc... I think. I'm not sure I wrote it down correctly, but on Monday I will show her and ask her opinion.
*Also, I might have written this for someone, but I'm really unsure if my feelings are romantic or so friendly that I'm in the "I'll do anything to help my friends, even risk my safety" stage for this friendship. I was inspired by this techno song "Britney Spears & Louis La Roche - Inside Out (Bugzz French House Mix)" to write this poem.
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